ACTIVITY: WRITING AN REPORT

 

 

Aims:

 

To identify approaches to report writing.

 

Outcomes:

 

Students will have

 

 

Tasks:

 

  1. In small groups discuss the report titles provided, make brief notes on each of each of them.
  2. Think about and decide which of the titles you want to write your report on.
  3. In groups, with other who have also chosen to do the same report write down notes of all the points you plan to cover.
  4. Now sort out which points go together, and the order in which you will use them in the report. If you can at this stage, add any sources of evidence for particular points using the extended notes you have written on the subject.
  5. Draw up a plan of your report using the resource below:

 

RESOURCE 1

 

Formal report writing

 

The structure of a report is divided into four or five sections (depending on whether recommendations have been asked for in the ‘Terms of Reference’).

 

  1. TERMS OF REFERENCE
  2. PROCEDURES
  3. FINDINGS

 

Section 3 Sub-Heading

Sub-point

Sub-point

  1. CONCLUSIONS
  2. RECOMMENDATIONS

 

 

 

Definition of a report

 

A report is a document containing an examination of a situation or problem. When drafting the report the writer should give careful thought to the arrangement of the information and make use of headings and sub-headings

 

General Layout

 

Report on ……………(statement of the subject of the report)

 

            Terms of reference

 

Under this heading there should be a clear statement of what the report will deal with. Great care must be taken over this, as your report must not mention anything that is not strictly relevant to the Terms of Reference. Conversely, it must not be a superficial treatment of the subject.

 

Procedure

 

Under this heading you should give an indication of how you collected the information for the report (if relevant).

 

Findings

 

Under this heading you should give all the information you wish to on the subject you are reporting on. You should make full use of sub-headings and arrange your material in a logical sequence. Keep in mind that this part of the report should be as objective as possible, just

making observations about the situation.

 

Conclusions

 

Conclusions should follow logically from the findings, pulling together the separate points into a generalised statement or statements. If you have several points to make, this points should be numbered.

 

Recommendations

 

Recommendations should be included only if requested and/or are strictly relevant to the report. The evidence for any recommendations should be contained in the findings and should follow logically from the conclusions you have made. Any recommendations you make must be realistic and should be specific as possible. They should always be worded so that they contain the word should. If you have more than one recommendation, they should be written as a numbered list of points.

Signature:- Date:-

 

 

General Points

 

 

 

practicable.

 

writing about.

 

 

 

 

RESOURCE 2

 

Specimen short formal report

 

FOR:     P.J.Haris, Managing Director                                    REF:   TUC/W/Man Hand

 

FROM:  M Myles, USDAW Health and Safety Rep                   DATE: 14 May 1999

 

REPORT ON THE PROPOSAL TO INTRODUCE A MANUAL HANDLING SYSTEM IN SOUTH EAST REGIONAL SERVICES

 

1.0             TERMS OF REFERENCE

 

On 17 Mar 1999 the managing director asked a specially set up joint management/union working party to investigate the practicality of introducing a system of manual handling in all south east region departments. This

followed an increase in accidents to staff. He asked for appropriate recommendations. The report was to be submitted to him by 21 May 1997 for the consideration of the senior management.

 

2.0            PROCEDURE

 

            In order to obtain relevant information and opinion, the following procedures

            were adopted by the working party to acquire the information in the report:

 

2.1. Current legal literature was reviewed. ( Appendix 1 Bibliography refers.)

           

2.2.             A number of workplaces were visited which have adopted manual

handling systems and the views of a wide range of staff were canvassed.

 

2.3.             Current departmental working loads and practices were observed and

            evaluated.

 

2.4.            Workers’ responses were obtained from departmental managers, senior

staff and health and safety representatives.

 

2.5.            The cost of introducing a manual handling system was considered.

 

2.5.            Accident statistics were examined.

 

 

3.0              FINDINGS

 

3.1.            Principles of the Manual Handling System

 

The essence of a manual handling system consists of establishing safe working practices and assessing risks with a view to introducing control measures.

 

            3.1.1.            Staff affected

 

Over one week a sample of staff involved in manual handling processes were observed carrying out tasks. The nature of the job was also discussed with staff.

 

3.1.2        Risk Assessment

 

The three risks identified were:

 

·        Size of packaging was too large.

·        No mechanical lifting appliances available

·        Individual capabilities not taken into account.

 

3.1.3.      Training

 

·        This was ad hoc with only some staff having undergone any form of training.

·        No temporary staff had been offered training.

 

3.2.            Discussion with  Departmental Managers and Safety Representatives

 

Most departmental managers were in favour of introducing a manual handling system, anticipating an improvement in both productivity and absence rates.

Reservations were expressed by both the health and safety officer and managers that workloads would increase in administering the new system.

 

3.3.            Sounding of Staff Opinion

 

Enquiries were made via safety representatives regarding the likely response of staff.

 

3.3.1        Summary of Favourable Responses

 

Staff in particular would welcome the means of improving manual

handling operations. Many staff had different individual capabilities which needed taking into account.

 

3.3.2        Summary of Unfavourable Responses

 

Some staff seemed less enthusiastic about the introduction of a manual handing system unless full consultation was carried out, so that their views were obtained.

 

3.4.            Cost of  Introducing a Manual Handling System

 

The increase in costs of training, lifting equipment and administration of the system would be offset to some degree by a decline in sickness absence and the cost of employing temporary staff to cover for staff absences, which may be expected to reduce. (Appendix 3 provides a detailed estimate of the cost of introducing and running a manual handling system).

 

4.0              Conclusions

 

In the working party’s view the advantages of introducing a manual handling outweigh the disadvantages. Staff morale, health and productivity are likely to rise in the medium term. Equipment and administrative costs appear acceptable and the senior staff has the necessary expertise to make the system work. Of necessity, the working party’s view was broad rather than detailed. The introduction of manual handling systems should allow for the particular needs and problems of individuals to be taken into account as far as

possible.

 

5.0              Recommendations

 

As a result of its investigations, the working party recommends that senior

management give active consideration to the following.

 

5.1.      That the introduction of a manual handling systems be accepted in principle and staff and union consultations begin as soon as possible with a view to establishing a timetable for implementing risk assessments.

 

                                           

                 

 

 

 

5.2              That all departmental managers be requested to provide a detailed

appraisal of their needs in implementing a manual handling system and of any problems they anticipate.

 

5.3              That a training programme be devised by the health and safety officer and training departments to familiarise staff with new working procedures and practices.

 

5.4.      That a code of practice be compiled for inclusion in the company 

               handbook

 

5.4.1.            That arrangements be made in inform staff and all levels of

management at the appropriate time of the advantages to them

                        of the introduction in the south east regional services of a

                        manual handling system.